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November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, what an evil little tease ending it like that! Please get Hermione over her stupid little snit soon so we can have some action!
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November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! You story is just so hot!! "-) Can't wait for the next chapter. Thank you for updating so soon.
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November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch.8 - First off, you should be way back in the line for betas. Your writing is very polished as is. I only noticed a couple of missing words which you can add easily. The sentences, "How long do expect testing to take?" and "What would like to do for the rest of the day?" are both missing the word 'you'.
Second, I very much like that Hermione isn't a pushover for Lucius. Lemons are all very well and good (okay, I love them like anybody else) but the plot of Hermione and Lucius coming from poles apart to some sort of togetherness is much better told if they aren't constantly in the sack (darn it). So, I'm happy that Lucius continues to think like crafty Lucius and can't understand Hermione's viewpoints - yet - as she teaches him about her values. Oh, and I have posted reviews for you before. I used Xanti1100 before I started writing my fanfictions, so I'm not a latecomer. I just wanted the separation of an author's name. 8-)
Loving your Lucius character and waiting for more. Twiddling thumbs here. Thank you for updating!
Second, I very much like that Hermione isn't a pushover for Lucius. Lemons are all very well and good (okay, I love them like anybody else) but the plot of Hermione and Lucius coming from poles apart to some sort of togetherness is much better told if they aren't constantly in the sack (darn it). So, I'm happy that Lucius continues to think like crafty Lucius and can't understand Hermione's viewpoints - yet - as she teaches him about her values. Oh, and I have posted reviews for you before. I used Xanti1100 before I started writing my fanfictions, so I'm not a latecomer. I just wanted the separation of an author's name. 8-)
Loving your Lucius character and waiting for more. Twiddling thumbs here. Thank you for updating!
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November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I was so thrilled to see that you updated. Thank you!!! This was a great chapter by the way. Please update soon. This truly is one of my favorite stories. "-)
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November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh man!!! I got to the end of the chapteer and was like... NO!!! I want the next chapter!!! I want to read what happens next!!! I needs to know!!!Please update soon! I'm dying to find out what happens
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November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am so impressed. I was so interested in this story, but I had suspected that as soon as Lucius and Hermione had hit the sheets, I would see intstant, improbable love and affection. This promises that he is going to have to work really hard to learn what to do now that he's made this mess.
So, is there SOCIALLY no divorce, or legally no divorce, or magically no divorce... I'm wondering about her plea of divorce. Is she truly trapped and doesn't realize it, or is Lucius not going to let her go and she doesn't realize it, or does she know and is trying to rub it in his face that he asked for it? :D Just things I think about.
Thanks for the update, I like your writing quite a bit.
So, is there SOCIALLY no divorce, or legally no divorce, or magically no divorce... I'm wondering about her plea of divorce. Is she truly trapped and doesn't realize it, or is Lucius not going to let her go and she doesn't realize it, or does she know and is trying to rub it in his face that he asked for it? :D Just things I think about.
Thanks for the update, I like your writing quite a bit.
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November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank You, MikiB! I look forward to more Luscious Lucius updates soon!
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November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i am very happy with the story and i so LOVED the last chapter and this one was really good too. Hermione is such a fool sometimes, se could and would appreace the jewels and the cloths just make a statement sometimes. so i do hope that wont deture lucius for sometimes spoiling her and i do hope she accepts it better. sorry some of that spill was just me i do love and like the gift yet i don't think it should be all the time or even just to make up an agument-okay i am done, i promise! do update soon i look forward to what will happen next!:)
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November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great post, can't wait until you post again, so please post again soon. Thanks.
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November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love it. Lucius at his finest. Blackmail. Lust .Greed. Social status. Lucius is outdoing hisself. I can't wait for him to realize he needs her. sweet . Cant wait to find more. please update soon.