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Ch 10 - I think it would be a mistake if you re-wrote the chapter. The Lucius POV was needed and the ensuing battle needed as well. Hermione would be content to let things continue as they have gone despite what she thinks and some kind of action was needed to bring them back together. And boy, did you bring them back together! I must admit though that I was left wondering whether Hermione was refering to the spanking or the sex. Hmmm, interesting possibilities.

Awesome! I've been aching for this story to be updated! MoreMoreMore!

Yea! I am so thrilled you updated. I had been waiting with great anticipation for the gratuitous spanking scene. Those are my favorite.

I love the line

Chapter 10: Hermione appears to have awakened the beast in Lucius. Lucky girl. He's sated for now, but will he relax back into a more compliant husband or has she pushed him into that macho persona she felt on her derriere?

I can't wait to see if Hermione comes out swinging from her corner or if the fish fight was enough for the two of them for now. Will she retaliate for the spanking? At the time it looked like she was enjoying herself after the first shock wore off. It was obvious HE was enjoying himself.

So where does this dysfunctional marriage go from here? Are there any more surprises in store? Old girlfriends showing up and making trouble between Lucius and Hermione? Lucius cutting off her access to any money? Hermione organizing the house elves? Or redecorating his mansion in Gryffindor colors? I can't guess what will happen next. Hot chapter! Thanks!

Great post, love the story, can't wait until you post again, so please post again soon. Thanks

WOW! Excellent fic. I love it.
I'm a big fan of Lucius/Hermione.
I guess you can say that I have a thing for
older guys. Cold-hearted, older guys who are
as soft as a teddy bear. I imagine Lucius like that
with Hermione. Lol. I really hope you upate soon.

this is very good so far, i don't like when it is too easy for couples to get together, and your story is doing a goodjob of making it difficult for L & H , this seems to be the turning point though and I am ready, lol. Please don't make everyone wait too long for an update...I may cry... :)

omg.... Miki... if you don't update soon, i'm gonna cry!!! I love this, and can't wait for more! Please please PLEASEEEEEEEEEE don't wait weeks or months before you update!!! My hubby won't be able to stand my complaining! LoL... as you can see, some of us are pulling all the stops. Please update soon! I love you stories, and this one is just awesome.

I have really enjoyed your story thus far. I especially enjoy your balance of narative between Hermions and Lucius'points of view. I am currently working as a beta for five authors from www.grangerenchanted.com (which is an awesome site) and would be more than happy to help you out too. Please email me if you are interested and I can give you additional information and/or answer any questions you may have.

Yay you updated! I liked that fight scene, it really broke the solemnity of the anger between Lucius and Hermione.