rate_review Reviews

That was good! Different, but GOOD!!

(chapter 10)

This is the 'emo Hermione' chapter you suggested I read.

Nice! Not the Hermione-loves-Harry piece I was expecting (given your 'One of Two' short story which got me here) but good dialogue none-the-less. Clever idea for Hermione to be mixed up so much by Harry's love charm - maybe over-intellectualising, over-thinking the whole thing, not trusting her heart - but that's Hermione, I guess.

Although I'm surprised she isn't ANGRY at Harry, given that his meddling with their affections via the charm is what mixed her up with Ron and put their relationship on hold for 2 years in the first place. I, like Harry, would have expected her to be quite angry. Maybe Ron will be, if/when she tells him that the brake on their relationship was Harry's fault.

I agree with Hermione; Harry's a total and complete bastard!!! I can't see how their friendships can be repaired after this! Reading on ...

(chapter 3)

You're an excellent author; technically all the words are in the right place :-), good balance of narrative, description and dialogue. Eager to see what happens next ...

Please please please make a sequel?! I am begging you.