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for The lost child returns

by nightangle

person Natasha
schedule July 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is a really interesting story.
i believe that steffen/harry should be put in slytherin, find and retrieve the philosophers stone and give it to tom so that tom will have his body back!
person Zetunia
schedule July 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
um....well I love your story but if you need an idea...what if...OH..I know a hilarious one! What if Ron keeps trying to seduce Steffen xD and Ginny goes after Draco ((who goes with...Blaise?)) and Hermoine is jealous of Harry because she likes Ron and so she tries to set up a plot to get Steffen kicked out of school.And she does that by trying to make it look like he got Ginny pregnant. Draco is in fumes because uh.....he knew steffen is innocent and then Theadore ((who is in the posse)) is in love with Ginny so he says that Draco and them are lying ((cause Ginny seduced him under Hermoines imperio?)) and then somewhere Voldermort comes into this I guess?
person Anon
schedule July 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love the way the story is going right now. I dont have any ideas for you, but I think you have a great start to a seemingly great story. Im sorry I cant help you more with the plot or ideas for the plot. Thanks for writing this story I really like it.

The Toe
person as
schedule July 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I dont have any ideas for you, but I think you have a great start to a seemingly great story. ^_^
person AlleyKitten
schedule July 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*blink blink* ... i... i... i... LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD then again i'm a big fan of tom/harry pairings... it's my favourite, tho there's not that many out there and this one looks really interesting. i like what you've done with the storyline so far ^__^ *hopes for an update soon*
person VA
schedule July 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
im not sure about ideas, but keep going the way you are. i quite like this fic, so carry on, and update asap please.
xxx
schedule July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I like where its going. Please update soon
person Zetunia
schedule June 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
they are best friends!
thats ROCKS!
I love this fic a LOTTTT so far.I am putting it on my top list of favorite stories ^^