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for The lost child returns

by nightangle

person Child of the Darkened Moon
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So far an interesting story. Although you haven't written quite enough for a thorough judgement of that. So please write more.
person Daemon
schedule December 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the best stories I have read so far pleas contiue it.
person Nanashi
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my.... when is Voldemort going to show up?

I am looking forward to finding out the way Voldemort will be brought back to life, will there be flashbacks of Steffin's training
person Katrina
schedule October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wicked! I wasn't expecting your story to flow that way. With the way that first year is to go, maybe they can gather all the horaxcues and resurect Tom to his youngest self and thus Harry will beable to take his side.

Seeing that Harry is into hardcore BDSM, he might even have to go as a slave for his mate.

I like your story line and wish you the best. hopefully the few ideas I gave can help.

Cheers!
person BRM
schedule October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg i love it so far i really do hope you continue it so far it is one of my fave's
XDXD
person frozenrose
schedule September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi! I'm sure that you have everything well under control. It's kind of hard to give advice without knowing all the facts. For instance what you have planned for the story. If I knew that I could then give you some advice.
person Katonie
schedule August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey! YOu should continue with the same story line that it seems you're going with. To me it seems that Voldemort will be brought back in Steffin's first or second year. By the way I like that idea where he's trained to be aroused by pain.Keep the good work up!
person Wilder
schedule August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is a really interesting idea. i haven't really seen many fics with a truely deatheater severus that worked. so far this seems to. so harry was trained to be voldies mate... now he is starting hogwarts, this has alot of potential but could also go very wrong. is voldemort still going to possess Quirrel? or is there something else... harry, oops, steffin, could still be in Gryffindor, but if he likes his position as riddle's mate, or just doesn't know any better than slytherin is for him. i have to say i like your writing style, you are able to give a lot of information without droneing on. i look forward to more.
person Anon
schedule July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
IT IS GOOD UPDATE SOON
schedule July 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I look forward to the next part. Keep up the good work.