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for Delicious Dessert (Completed)

by ecco1983

person Serisent
schedule January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was a wonderfully written story and I enjoyed it very much except for one small thing: chocolate can kill dogs. Perhaps you should consider using a different flavor next time?
schedule May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Truly superb work! I've been trying to track down your email to tell you this, though I resolved to making an account instead. The thought of Remus & Sirius getting it on as their furry alter-egos is incredibly arousing, and I'd love to see it happen. Maybe you could put a twist on it and, say, have them do so during their years at Hogwarts? And maybe take turns topping one another, so that the animal was getting stuffed as opposed to the typical beast being on top.

Well, that's just my two cents. Feel free to drop me an email in regards to this challenge. ;)

~AOI
person MangaMistress
schedule October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok. I must ahve read this fic about half a dozen times cause it's so bloody cute and i've just decided that i should review it. *Hell i take my time don't i?*
Anyway, this is just so adorable and well written. Choc spread! MY Fav!=D Very clever and original. Well done tae ye.
person Ryua
schedule September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay, that was very, very fun...
person Joshua
schedule July 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, kinky ;) I like it! Again, it would help to show more and tell less, but still, an intersting and good story :)