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by avari20

person zane
schedule July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i like this a lot. you're right that time travel is really a hard topic to handle: you have to take care that they don't mess up history. you seem to be handling it well, plus you rarely use hard to read (and comprehend o_O) words. my head didn't ache trying to figure what you wanted to say (because of wrong grammar or spelling).

anyway, i want to ask you (if it will not spoil the whole story) how it will unite the present-day Hermione and Draco. if the answer would spoil it, then please update as soon as you can! keep up the good work!
person firewall
schedule July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I wondered why I was enjoying your writing so much and then I saw the you are the author of my favourite Future Parent Program!!! (Another chapter there would be lovely too.) I'm looking forward to seeing what happens here...kind of a take on Diana Galbaldon's books. I like it.
person geo
schedule July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it. It is a new idea and I think it will be a great story. I hope you update soon. Thanks!

geo
person FreakWave
schedule July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wooooo.... how spooky! This whole searching thing in the cellar creeped me out. The moment when he found the mass grave, there was a loud bang outside my window (starting-problems with a car or something) - and I nearly jumped out of my skin! *recovers from a heart attack* I like it very much so far. You've done a great job with the atmosphere in this story, and I'm looking forward to the next chapters.

Take care
FreakWave :o)
person Given2Fly
schedule June 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You simply MUST update!!!

I went to MTSU myself for a semester, back in 2001....
person Chan
schedule June 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was great! Interesting twist to the time travel plot, and some nice comic touches. Looking forward to the rest of it.
person Elentari
schedule June 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love it!

It`s written the way I like it.
Despite some darker story details I had to laugh (mostly because of Dracos very good described reactions!).

I hope you update soon!

Elentari
person Aurora
schedule June 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting, and you can never go wrong with accidental time-hopping. Though I will admit picturing Hermione dressed like a 15th century scottish maid does create and interesting picture...Ah, well please continue.
person Megan Consoer
schedule June 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person gevfuan
schedule June 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
looks interesting. keep going!