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by avari20

person Kira
schedule August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOOOOOOOOOOOVE it! I love how accurate your historical facts are, which helps when you're a History major, I suppose. But anywhays! More more more!!!
person Parvati
schedule August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is really good, unbelievably good...but its also unusual which is probally what makes it so good... keep up the great work, and I will keep reading it, did i say it was good?
person RahNee
schedule August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Avari, darling! I love this story, especially the period feel to it! I'm a sucker for that Scottish brogue, too. I canna wait to see where this goes! You MUST update soon. I insist.

Cheers!
Ronnie
person Cutiepi
schedule August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is facinating. The fact that the setting is in old Scotland is wonderful. I can't wait until the next couple chapters to see what happens between Draco and Hermione. Also I wonder what will happen when they find out who Draco is related to and what it is that he is really there for. Keep up the great work!!!
person carabella
schedule August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yea, i noticed that little language lapse as well, but decided the story just wouldnt work without communication, lol. i cant wait to see how this plays out, since we know hannah's got at least three days before the attack. will draco save the day! oh i cant wait, hes so yummy, specially scottish-style, kudos.
person tina
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha, yeah, it'd be pretty weird for Draco to speak pre-Shakespearean English. And, Oh My God, you gave him a piercing! ^_^ Yum... It's a pretty good idea, though, I enjoyed imagining him with the silvery band, teehee. Switching POVs was interesting, I enjoyed Hermione's. *sigh* Too bad Hogwarts had yet to be founded those days...

Well, I loved this chapter, it's been fun. I can't imagine Draco ending a conversation because of food, that was sort of OOC, but I guess he would, just to get rid of the embarrassment of the sappy speech. Haha, you made Draco make a speech! It was fun, I can't wait for more!

XXX
person da4life
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow isn't this different...i really like it plz update soon
person Megan
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
there better be more and soon, I believe there are straving children in India that need this damn story!!!
person Christina
schedule August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful, this story is enthralling!!! More history majors should write Harry Potter stories, they are 110% written better than the norm. I hope you get another chapter up soon!
person tina
schedule July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, just wow! I also love history and this story is so absolutely amazing! I'm dying to know what comes up next, what did Aniston want and all the drama Draco's looks could cause, since he looks like Aniston. Also, about past lives and such, there's a story on fanfiction.net called "Once upon a thyme" that goes around the same lines, but much more differently. It's also D/Hr and I just know you'd love it.
I really like this story, I'll put it in my favs. Update soon!