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by avari20

schedule February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
whoa, I'm so enthralled into this story!
This is some good stuff!
You soo gotta update soon!
person ichiruki
schedule January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story! I've got a few I'm keeping my eyes on but I have to let you know that this is the one I keep hoping will be updated soon! I can't wait till the next chapter, this is very well written! I'm really excited to find out what happens next!
schedule January 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
update soon please
person The Charmed One
schedule January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! That was really awsome! You can't just end the chapter there! I want to read more, and now I have to wait 'till you update! So, please update soon!
person Saharah
schedule January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. ... I mean.. WOW.
I found your story at random tonight and just read the whole thing thus far. First of all, your writing style is amazing. You really take advantage of the complete range of the english vocabulary, which is appreciated, haha. Plus, (with somewhat nerdy joy) I love the touches of accurate history you stitch through. Oh.. and I LOVED the part about the difference between *school* and *learning*. I had to take a chemistry 100 course last semester. It's pure torture, even for someone who loves learning, to be forced to stuff your brain with things you have no desire to know! *shakes head*
Anyway, my tangents aside, your story is incredible. The plot is so intricate and layered. *applauds* Can't wait for the next chapter!
person Mindy
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this story. Very well written. I hope you definitely intend to finish it and not lose interest, that would be a shame. For some reason chapter 7 keeps coming up as a blank white page. I don't know what the problem is, or if anyone else is having the same problem, but I thought I'd let you know in case it's something you knew how to fix. Anyway, looking forward to the rest.
person Vixen
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, really well done.
Vixen x
person exilesin
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good lord, so good! I'm such a sucker for time travel tales and you're doing a great job with this one! Very, very entertaining - I'll be on the edge of my seat for the next chapter! Thanks for sharing :)
person Megan Consoer
schedule October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person evelyn lake
schedule October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow! you are totally my fave author right now! UPDATE!!UPDATE!! you nearly killed me when i realised both 'FPP' and 'Searching'are still incomplete..pleeeeeeaaaaassseee update rily soon or i'm gonna cry!