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for Comfort from a Nightmare (Completed)

by ecco1983

schedule June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The dialogue's not so great, but the rest..GODDAMN.
person dolcina
schedule March 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wicked. Awesome. *applause*
person Prieel
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cute^^
Like it!
person The Miss Marauders
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was brilliant!
x Cazzy x
person The Miss Marauders
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice...^^^^^^
x Cazzy x
person Anon
schedule July 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
All of the question marks on pretty much every sentence need to go...it will make it much easier to read!!
person Joshua
schedule July 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A lovely story. :)