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for My Happy Ending

by Shanastay

person Persy
schedule January 22, 2022 at 12:00 AM

Snape ran after her, knowing she would be too distraught to use her magic sensibly, he found her trying to drown herself in the murky waters of the Thames. He ran to her pulled her out of her death knell and shoved a pensive in her arms, he quickly dropped his recent memories of himself and her. She glared into the memories that had just played out just an hour before. As Hermione emerged from the pensive she stood, shell shocked in front of her husband. "Let us get our revenge, sweet wife and we shall dance upon Potters' corpse" whispered her husband, "we shall make him pay with his very lifes' blood"! They found Potter at his home, Hermione went to him first, he saw her through his curtained windows, "Good, now she will live has both Ron and I are"! he muttered to himself. He answered the door and just as Hermione was crossing the threshold, Snape popped up behind his now livid wife, both wands at the ready; "What!!!???" before Harry got another word out, Severus and Hermione both cast Avara Kadavera on Harry, he vaporized with not a sign of his existence anywhere. They both spit where he once was, wrapped their arms around each other and headed for home. Happily Ever After!

person Persy
schedule September 4, 2021 at 12:00 AM

HARRY POTTER MUST DIE!!!!!!

person Persy
schedule June 21, 2021 at 12:00 AM

I liked the story, well written, simply sick, I must say.

person Anon
schedule August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person takemeaway
schedule September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oooohhhh. I loved that. Harry is bitter because his and Ron's lives have been ruined, but Hermione is so happy. I honestly did not see that coming, so Bravo! I thought for sure it was going to be the illicit lover coming out of the shadows. I am going to go read the sequel now, as this one was so good.
person jenne
schedule September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic! Well written. I'd like to see you develop this into a bigger story, but it could be tricky. I'd advoid using more songs within the story though, it worked here because of the brevity, but in longer stories it becomes distracting and cheesy. Thanks
person Aelfwine
schedule September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story . Great plot twist . write a sequel, or a prequel
person Chavela
schedule September 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
FUCKING PERFECT!

Damn bloddy brialliant! And you are just a damn good writer, this story is genius!
person Megan Consoer
schedule July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person lemonade
schedule July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'll get this out of the way first... I don't normally enjoy having to read my stories around lyrics of a song, and I'm not always fond of dark!Harry. That said, I really liked your story ! You took some of my least favorite things and still wrote a story compelling enough for me to enjoy, so you deserve lots of praise. I'd love to see where you would go with this.

Very nice!