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March 19, 2016 at 12:00 AM
hi. I really like this story. will there be more chapters in the future?
tnx
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July 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Great so far! I like it.
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May 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I really like this story ^^ I wonder were your going to take it. A story you might like is Hopes and Wishes by She Who Must Be Obeyed (http://hp.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=600022275&chapter=1) Write more soon Please XD
~Kera
~Kera
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December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
will this be updated soon? I really like it!
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June 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a VERY intersting start to this story. I hope to read more. Great stuff!!!! :)
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February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I agree with eroburn.
Ancient beginnings is a pedantic twat!
AU or no, this story is really good and I like it better than the alternate story New Hope.
Update soon, we need more of the Snape family cuteness!
Ancient beginnings is a pedantic twat!
AU or no, this story is really good and I like it better than the alternate story New Hope.
Update soon, we need more of the Snape family cuteness!
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January 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ancient Beginnings
for the love of a good plot do be quiet. if you wish to read harry potter please do so:)
and leave AU for the rest of us.
you're presumptious and rather mean.
but as far as i am aware it does not state sev's age in any of the books, nor when he was born. just because some site has some info the author wrote or a timeline does not mean anyone has to use it.
if you want total factual fiction please go somewhere else.
insulting someone when their story is really good is just pathedic.
i happen to love this story and it is obviously AU.
there are lots of those stories out there.
are you going to flame them all?
heaven forbid.
now that i am throughly disgusted after reading your post. i shall go back to my original post.
love your story. would love an update on it. there is a delete button for reviews such as the one above mine.
feel free to use it if you feel so inclined. updates make me happy. i think this is a great story so far:)
Your loyal fan,
-eroburn
for the love of a good plot do be quiet. if you wish to read harry potter please do so:)
and leave AU for the rest of us.
you're presumptious and rather mean.
but as far as i am aware it does not state sev's age in any of the books, nor when he was born. just because some site has some info the author wrote or a timeline does not mean anyone has to use it.
if you want total factual fiction please go somewhere else.
insulting someone when their story is really good is just pathedic.
i happen to love this story and it is obviously AU.
there are lots of those stories out there.
are you going to flame them all?
heaven forbid.
now that i am throughly disgusted after reading your post. i shall go back to my original post.
love your story. would love an update on it. there is a delete button for reviews such as the one above mine.
feel free to use it if you feel so inclined. updates make me happy. i think this is a great story so far:)
Your loyal fan,
-eroburn
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December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This fanfic, unlike most, does not follow the books at all. It involves a fantasy plot, fairytale storyline, and completely ruins the character of one of the most foul people Hogwarts has ever had the pleasure of calling its student.
The grammer and spelling are horrible, as well as the idea that Snape, even when young and foolish, would ever, ever, adopt Harry Potter. Not only does this fanfic not follow the books, it doesn't even follow the timeline of Snape and Potter. Harry James Potter, born 1980; Severus Snape, born 1958. When Harry was born, Snape was 22. Being 23 when his 'son' found Harry, the boy, much less the son, because it was said they were around the same age, wouldn't have been able to talk or much less understand what "adopt" means.
Snape, while not so well off, would have enough to support himself with, because he kept employed. He was hired by Hogwarts in 1981 as Potions Master and Head of Slytherin House.
Please. Follow at least the timeline before writing a ficcy. You don't have to follow the books-the best ones don't-but they also don't ruin a characters personality, they merely twist it in a fashion that, from the characters original personality, can be expected.
All information garnered from either the books directly, or from www.hp-lexicon.org, which has been recognized by J.K. Rowling herself as one of the most accurate sites to go to.
The grammer and spelling are horrible, as well as the idea that Snape, even when young and foolish, would ever, ever, adopt Harry Potter. Not only does this fanfic not follow the books, it doesn't even follow the timeline of Snape and Potter. Harry James Potter, born 1980; Severus Snape, born 1958. When Harry was born, Snape was 22. Being 23 when his 'son' found Harry, the boy, much less the son, because it was said they were around the same age, wouldn't have been able to talk or much less understand what "adopt" means.
Snape, while not so well off, would have enough to support himself with, because he kept employed. He was hired by Hogwarts in 1981 as Potions Master and Head of Slytherin House.
Please. Follow at least the timeline before writing a ficcy. You don't have to follow the books-the best ones don't-but they also don't ruin a characters personality, they merely twist it in a fashion that, from the characters original personality, can be expected.
All information garnered from either the books directly, or from www.hp-lexicon.org, which has been recognized by J.K. Rowling herself as one of the most accurate sites to go to.
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October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
aww sev made harry famliy by blood ... i love how sev played with the and he gave the kids chors .. that was great please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ..later for now
angel
angel
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October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is great. Are you going to continue?