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May 17, 2017 at 12:00 AM
It's not even a full one shot:( stops before anything good happens
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June 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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June 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it sounds good i can't wait to see more!!
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June 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i like it so far can't wait for the next installment.
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June 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i really like it, but do you think you could put spaces between the paragraphs? it's just easier on the eyes that way. ;) update soon o can't wait to find out what happens next!
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June 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
GOOD START...i can't wait for the next installment!