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by blondebear

schedule September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 7! Hope Harry knows what she's doing!
person Extraho
schedule September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
brilliant. i love this steamy harry
schedule September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
funny as shit!
person NightLo
schedule April 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is just too short - and all about Ron - not that Ron's no good, but my favourite pair is Draco/Harry...and there is Hermione's issue not being explained! BTW, have she and Ron started going out?
schedule April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Tooo funny! Sooo need chapter 6!
person NightLo
schedule April 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well...I highly doubted that Neville made the 'wrong' potion on purpose - to announce that Harry was his! And now having Hermione with him...am I correct?

Haven't Snape checked twice the effect wore off by NOW?
schedule April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my! And Hermione called Harry a slut! Sooo can't wait for more!
schedule February 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is soo cool!! I can't wait to see what you do next
person NightLo
schedule February 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well...things just turn too quickly! And I did have difficulty in catching up - especially when I reached chapter 3 - has Harry arrived a pact with Draco? Why? To not exposing the truth of her identity? Please explain more in coming chapters.
person Jan
schedule February 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! What a great start. Harry being a girl, nice touch. Oh! I have to say that I love the ending of this chapter.