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can't wait the next part!!
this series is great

It's good, though I admit the thought of hermione cursed that way does not appeal to me..
some of the curses are.. well.. weird.
Nice job with wormtail at the end.. cried a bit there, actually :P

I just started reading your stories (it has taken me a week to read all the stories you have posted yet) and i cant wait for the next one....seriously nice imagination,good understanding of the Hp series and good plots..

Holy cow! That's quite a payoff! You managed to bring this fic to an exciting conclusion while setting the wheels in motion for the next one!

I particularly enjoyed Peter's redemption. It seemed both perfectly IC and very satisfying--I've never read a Peter-pays-his-debt scene quite like that, and yet it made perfect sense. That the hand that Voldemort gave Wormtail came back to bite him--literally! Lovely!

And I loved how he went from "Wormtail" when he first appeared to "Peter" at the end...

Poor Ernie. :-(

And I'm worried about Fred and George... Though if George is out of action for a while... Hmmmmmm! ;-)

I've been following this series and I like it alot it keeps getting better and better and the plot twist are cool and surprising im sad at what happened to Earnie and I hope they cure Hermione keep up the good work

There's nothing wrong with the writing, but there are a few errors..
For example, Harry knows very well that Voldemort can break through a memory charm, if he needs to..
Also, a reductor curse does not kill, it destroys objects, not people...
If it had been possible to kill people with it, then there's no way it had been taught at hogwarts, being a rather simple spell to cast.

EXCELLENT CHAPTER!!! keep it up.

Wee! Yet another wonderful chapter.

I just checked over on Cipher, and none of the chapter reviews that I've been leaving seem to have posted. :-p

Suffice it to say, I've enjoyed the story so far, and am very much enjoying the fluff to angst to plot ratio.

Even if you do continue to tease me.

Wow. I didn't know this was here. I was thinking I would have to wait to read the next part of this story on rs.org so imagine my delight to find it posted here. Very, very cool. I'm very invested in this story now, so I do hope that it will continue for a good long time. Such a well thought-out plot, nice use of language, good characterizations... Wonderful job!

Yummy! :)