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for What the Devil Wants

by harriet

person darkpyroangel06
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Marvelous, really. I'm assuming that the bond makes Harry want and need to be near Severus as much as possible. The butterflies calming down when he was pulled against Severus, I mean. And Severus apologized about not healing Harry's mark beforehand. That was pretty amazing. I was surprised, but then again I wasn't, by Sirius. I want to smack that man. I understand what he's feeling. My best friend ran away and married her boyfriend, whom all of us hate and loathe with a passion. Her family, her friends, everyone hated him and now they pretty much hate her. They treat her coldly and berate her. While he's standing right there! I don't like him, and I'm not proud of what she did. But I try to carry on as normal. If he steps out of line (and it has to be reasonable because my friend can kick my arse easily) then I knock him back into place. Either verbally or physically. While she may be able to kick my arse, I can still kick his ten times over. He really is jerk. So I know how Sirius is feeling, but I also know how Harry is feeling. I wish they would at least try to treat him semi-normally. Snape treats everyone the same: he hates them all. LOLz! ~dpa06~
person Lioncourt
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*glows with satisfaction* MMMmmmmmmmmmm... It's not possible not to enjoy it. I really liked... really liked... well, everything...Draco being nice, Severus being attentive, Harry being insecure, Severus being hot, me drooling...
person Ellie
schedule December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story! And a great idea! I want more!!!!!!
person Olivia
schedule December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn it!
This happens with all your works, you get me wrapped up in it, then I reach the newest chapter.
Please update.
:D
person hermoine said so
schedule December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please please please update again soon. i really can't wait for the next part i really love this story.
person antipyro
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love the additional chapter updates.

Do you send out emails with update reminders? If so, please put me on the list. I sometimes don't check the male/male stories and get frustrated with not finding your fine work in the Harry/Severus columns.

The intimacy you put in all your stories makes them exceptionally special. It's all in the details....and yes, the hot smutty stuff is fantastic too! It's always with purpose and doesn't spoil the mood by being brash and just thrown in there.

Whenever you can, we're all busy.....but we read you religiously!
person LadyJane
schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really, really like and enjoy your stories ever so much, but please, please write Gryfindor with double 'f', it's Gryffindor! It does hurt ones eyes. And please don't take this for a flame, it really isn't meant that way!

Apart from that, I believe Harry has it coming for him, he IS behaving very inappropriately and obnoxious.
person Dragonero
schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very good!!! I wonder if harry will learn how to act. To let himself be dominated does not really seem to be in his nature. I
person SilverPhoenix69
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loved the two updates..I've been waitig, which is very very hard for me to do *winks*...Cant wait for the next chapter(s) :)
person yoblossom
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
^_^ Well, I'm glad that the two of them are good now. I really can't wait for the next chapter! please update soon!