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for What the Devil Wants

by harriet

person Rowan Falar
schedule February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Argh!!!

Please please please tell me that you'll be updating this one soon! Pretty please?!? *bats eyelashes*
person Cyador
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story - please update?
person Anon
schedule February 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Still waiting... But I'm patient. I'm even more patient than a turtle. I can wait.
schedule February 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I Absolutly Luuuuuuve it !!!!!!......................update or else!!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule February 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Argh! I got spoiled reading the story uo through 38!! Gonna go find you on LJ since AFF doesn't give a way to track stories! Unless you WANT to email me! ;D
person Seph7
schedule February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
When I first started reading this story, it sparked me as a little Snarry sex romp, but it has turned out to be much more! I admittedly have a hard time reading stories with Dom/Sub themes, and one story that had such a theme haunted me for weeks on end, even though I couldn't stop reading it. I am not into such themes myself, but I often let my curiosity get the better of me and have to read them! This is beautifully written, and I look forward to seeing the two come to a lovely mutual agreement!. I don't mind subs who want to be there, but the other story I read was a take on the marriage law and it had Hermione being a sub for a very demanding Snape, who never let her voice her protestations, despite the safe words that are usually used in such relationships. It bothered me greatly that this authors version of Snape took an almost devious pleasure from causing physical pain and humiliation to his forced wife. I am glad that this story is not like that. I can see that these two are developing a healthy relationship, and as Snape said, Harry needs someone to depend on, as he has never had it in his life. Please update soon! I'm a somewhat sucker for punishment!!!
schedule January 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Woooow... *drools*

Amazing story. Absolutely...wow.

person Anon
schedule January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i really enjoyed reading this. I can't wait to see what happens next. Please update soon!!
person Missa
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Update this one!! I wanna now what happens...and I want more than just Mating sex...sheesh!
person Mie
schedule January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh Oh oh You can't do this I need more please please please I love this story and when it is finished if allowed i am gonna print it and keep it but please update soon I am now firmly addicted to your writting style. I need a fix soon please please *shamelessly begging with big huge puppy dog eyes wet with tears*