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for What the Devil Wants

by harriet

person Nikki
schedule June 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is the first time I've ever reviewed one of your stories (and I've read all of them ^_^) and I have to say that you have done another outstanding job. I'm sitting at my laptop near the end going "Is it Snape? It has to be Snape! PLEASE let it be Snape!!" Of course now when Harry persues our darling dungeon dweller and he finds out about Draco's 'payment', he's going to be piiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiissed.
What if he's not even mad at first about the payment? What if he actually WANTS Draco and when Harry starts to really persue him, he'll be mad that someone wants him away from his intended?
There's a twist to make Harry REALLY work for his man.

Keep up the fabulous work Riffraff!

YOU ROCK!!

-N
person Sophia
schedule June 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this chapter. I surely didn't expect that to be the price Harry now has to pay for Draco's silence. Keep up the very good work and I can't wait to see what happens next.~Sophia
schedule June 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omigosh. you SO totally need to post more... I'm dying to read more I can barely stand it! I really want Harry to get into Snapes pant's soon! please hurry!
person Hambares
schedule June 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Snape doesn't want to be willing or suitable, huh? Maybe he just needs to spy on Harry with the person who was on the note (Draco?). Maybe Snape will be a bit jealous!
person woof
schedule June 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok, so it's another evil Riffraff cliffie. Ya think I'd be used to them by now. The question now is........do we kill the evil author or????????? Hmmmmmm, requires more planning.
person Sophia
schedule June 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Don't worry; I'm also hopelessly in love with Snape. I really liked this chapter and I can't wait to see what happens next. Especially with Harry's first blowjob. Keep up the magnificent work!!!~Sophia
person Kata
schedule June 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for updating so often! I come every day to see new chapters, just can't wait what happen next!

Maybe it's Draco's name in the note? I hope Snape will be little jealous and I really hope he will be Harry's first... Hmm..? Interesting :-)

Love,
Kata
person woof
schedule June 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
screw RL!!! On with the story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
person DBI
schedule June 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OOhh!! I want more....Your stories are the best and i can hardly wait for the next chapter and your next story
Much love and huggles!!
person Hambares
schedule June 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You evil person you! Clever on Harry's part though. Can't wait to see what Snape does with it!