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for What the Devil Wants

by harriet

person Violet Eyes
schedule September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*begs for another chapter* Please give me a Harry/Snape fix, I'm addicted. I love your story. Please, please, please, update. *makes puppy eyes*
person Honey Girl
schedule September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I REALLY love your stories where Snape is the dom. and Harry the sub. Its so secksi! You're just awesome. ^.^
schedule September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I finally got my computer to work right. Thank you tech crew! Anyways, this was a great chapter. I was wondering when Severus was going to snape and be especially dominant. I guess Harry throwing a fit was one way to do it. Now... Now Harry's screwed. Or at least he wants to be and is on his way toward that goal. *sigh* Harry needs to work on controlling that temper or he's never gonna get his wand back. And that would be horrible. *snicker* ~dpa06~
schedule September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Not too bad. Little things like where he sits and making sure he eats are just small ways that Severus says 'I own you.', but they can be the most influential at times. And of course the students were going to stare. Students don't sit at the Head Table, and they don't follow Snape to Potions when he's done eating. I, too, hope Harry relaxes a bit more at lunch. Too much stress like that can make you sick after you eat. I know, personally. ~dpa06~
schedule September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Argh! He was so close! He'd gotten to the bottom on the mystery of why Severus had collared him, and then left him alone. And then he kissed him, which was all fine and dandy. Severus kissed him back. But then he tried to get closer and WHAM! Back on the floor where he's been for the past few weeks. *sigh* At least things will start to move along now. I mean, Harry's got to be frustrated. No magazines, no masturbating, and no touching really on Severus' part. That's gotta suck! Well, no. It's not sucking. Harry would be happy is Severus would suck. *snicker* Sorry. It's too early in the morning and yet here I am, reviewing. I need more sleep... ~dpa06~
person darkpyroangel06
schedule September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That just blows. I mean... Harry's going to be so worried about Severus until he comes back now that he's seen a glimpse into Severus' mind of fantasies. It was a pretty tame fantasy, compared to what I think is laying in wait behind Severus' walls of Occlumency. And quite frankly, I'm worried for Severus as well. I mean, all Voldemort has to do is find out that he has almost complete control of Harry and still hasn't brought him in, and Sev's dead. Gone. Deceased. Never existed. Pushing up daisies. Get it yet? LOL! Sorry. Anyways, I liked this chapter because Harry got what he wanted to a point, Severus is getting what he wants to a point, and the Mr. Moldy Shorts shows up and screws everything over. Just like how it should be. *sigh* ~dpa06~
person Kateri
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY! New chapters are wonderful things. Oh boy, Harry seems to have gotten himself into a bit of a situation, and a very hot one at that ;)
person glasswalker
schedule September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Quite a long absence ideed! Don't let real life get you down too much, after rain there'll eventually be a rainbow. :)
Pleeeeeeez go on soon, I just love your writing. I cannot believe that I am reading this so long and although Severus is fearsome and brutal from time to time. I just love it this way! I never read another story with this power to capture the emotion and the trust in this kind of a relationship so perfectly. And it's been very long since I went on reading although there was physical harm done to one of the characters by the other.
Take this babbling as one huge compliment to your style and your story and keep in mind that I'm no native and therefore my English is crappy. Sorry.
:)
Amy
person manx
schedule September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is truly one of my favorite stories.
person Hambares
schedule September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, another cliffhanger! I can't wait to see what Voldemort wants/will do to Severus. I hope your RL will allow you to write again soon! I like Harry's thoughts on getting his wand back (when all he wants now is Snape's protection)