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for How They Fell

by phoenixchild101

person DarkDemonGurl
schedule October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
love your story update soon!!!!
person Dravana
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please continue.. i beg of u.. i want to see what happens.
person PadfootLivesOn
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is great. You write very well. I could not stop reading, until I read all the chapters, that were posted, it's addictive LOL But I have to comment on one thing, please please speed it up a bit, I'm sorry, but I had to say it. It's just that after 31 chapter and not a move from either of them, no action at all! Harry doesn't know he likes Draco yet(well he kinda does, but not really), Draco is so so frustrating with his denail. I don't mean to rant or anything, and I hope you don't take this in a bad way, but it's just that fic is moving along a little slowly in terms of H/D romance wise.

But I guess that what your going for, and you are the writer, so it doesn't matter what I say really. I'll just have to suck up and wait just like everyone else, and I will, cause I need to know what is going to happenen next, like I said the fic is addictive LOL

Update soon!

Cheers!

~Pamela~
person st
schedule October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*officially in love with this fic* ^_^ *sigh* i love you :P hehehe
person Minea
schedule October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yey draco got everything he had back.
person Bookworm51485
schedule September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well I liked this chapter as usual, but something confused me so I wanted to ask. You mention Draco applying as Head of House of both Malfoy and Black. But if I remember the book correctly, Sirius was the head of the black house and Harry was his heir. So wouldn't that make Harry the Head of House for the Black family and Draco unable to apply for the positiong? Or am I remembering the story wrong (this is a distinct possibility) or maybe I'm just mixing canon up with some fanfics I read?

Anyways, other than that bit of confusion I liked the chap. I want to kick Draco for ignoring Harry but I guess he needs to get himself completely together before he can deal with him. Oh well, I just hope he comes to his senses soon.
person anon
schedule September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
poor, stupid, stupid draco...*sigh* ^_^ update soon! poor harry! :(
person Amessis
schedule September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lord, I just want to shake Draco until he wakes up to reality! Well done though.
person Chachi
schedule September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying your storyline. While eager to get Harry and Drako together, I am in no way over eager. I like how you are building up the changes and discovery in the charachers as they come to realize the growth and changes in themselves. This is as the title says, "How They Fell." Not just what they did once they got there. Well done. I very much look forward to reading the rest of your work.

Cha
person Gabriel
schedule September 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic display of magic, infuriating Draco. Very good chapter, I can't wait to see more. I couldn't believe Hermione would give Harry a book like that!