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November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Uh....just thought I'd let you know it was very confusing to go back in time like that, even if it was from Draco's POV, not Harry's. It's very jarring - kind of throws you out of the story. :(
It'd be better if you continued in the same timeline, and had either an internal monologue from Malfoy, or even flashbacks, to fill in the gap. It would avoid confusing us poor little readers...at first I thought this was a chapter that got accidentally posted out of order!
Just a thought. :)
It'd be better if you continued in the same timeline, and had either an internal monologue from Malfoy, or even flashbacks, to fill in the gap. It would avoid confusing us poor little readers...at first I thought this was a chapter that got accidentally posted out of order!
Just a thought. :)
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November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my...I can imagine the difficulty that Draco is going through; just imagine if Prince Williams declares that he is gay. However, I hope Draco would be able to come to term with his conflicts soon, and realize that there are ways to obtain an heir without having to marry a woman, and that the ability to love, despite the gender of the object of the emotion, is not a flaw, and that the rest of the homophobic community can go and f**k themselves.
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November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Did you want to make us hate you with chapter 37 after the way you ended chapter 36?
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November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Why did you end it with such a cliffhanger? And I'm super giddy and then BOOM, chater ends! Update! I must know what happens next!!!
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October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You can't stop there!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! how could you??? NO NO NO NO!!!! get back and write! you evil, you know that???? UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOONNNNN, now!!!!!!
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October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
love ur story!! i think i've read it somewhere...definetly! is this story finished?? it better not be!! UPDATE! i love chapter 34! soooo sweet! :D. u wrote it beautifully. HP/DM ALL THE WAY! YEAA! :D:D
xx rach xx
xx rach xx
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October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what a great story! A friend of mine recommended this to me and damn what a read. I started reading two days ago and I'm already up to the latest chapter, heh, I even wanted to skip class today to read more (I'm a junior in college). I've noticed that there are some word confusions here and there, a random misspelling but it's great that you have a beta now. If you ever need another, I'd be more than happy to help (I'm an anal-retentive perfectionist, lol). Keep up the greatness!!
Ryan
Ryan
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October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
God this is Goooooooooooooood!!! Please write some more! I worship your writing!
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October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Every day I sit on the edge of my chair hopeing for a new chapter. I love this story, please keep on writing. :D
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October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hello... my name is Dravana and I love your story... i hope you continue it... it is so beautiful so perfect... thanx for your wonderful writing skills... thanks for such a story... i hoep you dont stop for several chapters... it is getting more interesting... not to mention such a cliffy... again thks it is wonderful to read such a story with a plot.