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for How They Fell

by phoenixchild101

person Jesse
schedule December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I need more--- love it still btw.. lol, there's not much more praise i can dish out that I already haven't.. oh! will you marry me?.. rofl-- hope to read more soon
-jesse
person Potter's Wifey
schedule November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love it.
person HentaiZaru
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That's so sad! How could the majority of the wizards and witches be homophobes? Yet the story is still great so please...UPDATE!
person stef
schedule November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay! nice long chapter! very very pleased i must say! good writing and excellent plot set-ups for this chapter... oh i do hope harry and draco get back together soon but i like the way you write and i feel that will ensure they dont just wake up one morning and go 'oh, i think i want him back again, i love him, always have' like some other authors tend to do. well done!
Stef
person SarahGranger
schedule November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good story... well done. Took a while for me to get into it though.
person arealdeal
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Not a happy camper here. What's wrong with Draco, guess he just doesn't read all the male preg ficts out there to know, the Malfoy name doesn't have to die with him. Just kidding, but update soon, don't want Harry unhappy for too long....
person damien
schedule November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like this story.
How often do you update?
person Rawben
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
damn! what a cliff i fell off!!! amazing. ;) i can't wait for the next chapter!!!
person Draven Wolfe
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAH, YOU BETTER HIDE! BUT YOU'RE GOING TO NEED A LOT MORE THAN A DUVET TO PRTECT YOU FROM MY CRAZY FAN-BOY WRATH!!!!
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Anyhoo, that was a fantastic chapter....Minus the whole sad, stupid-ass-idiotic-draco bit at the end. Grrr...
I just..GAH! I wanna grab his head and bang it repeatedly into my cimputer screen and knock the last few paragraphs off!!!!
NOOOOOO!!!!!
*wild, maniacal scream of ulitmate-frustration*
Goddamn it! If you weren't such an awesome-ass writer with a wicked story, I'd hunt you down! XD *hugs*
Poor Harry...Stupid Draco...*stabs Draco with fork* Why can't the just...I don't know...invent some crazy potion and have babies that way?! Or...erm....
I'm sure the Wizarding World is a bit more lenient with Gayness than the Muggles...maybe...*cries*
I wish Draco would realize that his Father is a nutjob (Literally! XD) and the ideals he pounded into his head from the day he was born are all crackpot-lunatic fallacies!!!
Wouldn't him being with HARRY POTTER, of all people, INCREASE the family standing?!
GRRRR!
Gods, I love you, and your wonderful writer/plot skills! NOW FIX IT! Teehee.
Much frustrated love,
Draven Wolfe.
person Draven Wolfe
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow....I wrote a WHOLE LOT more than that!!
Why didn't it show up? How odd...I wrote like...3 or 4 paragraphs more.
But, since I don't want to take the time to werite it all out again, let's just say that I basically just reiterated everything that 'esrinthly' said. :P