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for How They Fell

by phoenixchild101

person Draven Wolfe
schedule September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah...Lovely...*waits impatiently for more*
Do I see romance simmering in there some where? :O
Your Avid Fan,
Draven Wolfe.
person Amessis
schedule September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very well done again! I love watching things develop between them.
person Lee
schedule September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful, the boys are starting to feel something! Anyway, good job once again, will be waiting for an update.
Lee~
person Pixagi
schedule September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I heart all over this chapter ^___^ N ow, terrorize thy flatmates!
person alientheet
schedule September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey this story has really got me wondering wots gonna happen. keep it coming... loving it :)
person Lee
schedule September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sigh~ This story gets better and better! Another wonderful few chapters. Keep up the good work as always~ Lee
person Draven Wolfe.
schedule September 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmm...I like this chapter a lot! Like, extremely so. Heh.
I have a question for you: What would the boggart turn into for you?
For me, it would either be a spider (typical, I know) or my fiancee dead...Ugh. I don't even want to THINK about that...
So yesh, update soon! >.<
PS: I am not a know-it-all, so don't say so please! But uh...I just decided to mention that 'coarse' is spelled 'course'. The way you're spelling it means 'a rough texture'! XD *coughs*I'mapart-timeGrammarNazi*coughs*
person MewMew2
schedule September 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice job on the update! I egarly await your next with much patince and excitement.
person lizzie
schedule August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I thought this chapter was cute. I'm glad there starting to be friends
person anon
schedule August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hehe they're finally starting to get along! update soon!