rate_review Reviews

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

A wonderful story! I beg you please, update!

How to say this kidly...you write as if you're from the 1600s century! Who the hell writes, or talks for that manner, like this now? Now one! Make your writing more relaxed and less sophisticated/complex. You have a great story, but I can't go through with it. If the time the story took place was somewhere in the Renaissance period it would make more sense, but I presume that it's taking place this century, thus I see no reason for the teenagers to talk like they do in your story. Make the teenagers sound like teenagers, not over-arrogant professors discussing Shakespeare. All in all your story and writing is pretty good.

Wow that was really great. I loved Hermione and Nacissa's evoliving relationship. The constant bantering and challenge of wills were very entertaining. I can't wait to see you update this one!