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by PatienceTyme

person Brenda
schedule October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was a great story i really like how hermoine and Narcissa interacted. I especially love hermoine's and draco's bantering. Please post the sequel i would love to see how it finishes. Oh and post your other stories too i would really like to read them.
person Camryn
schedule October 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg, i LOVE this story!!!! it's sooo good!!! i like how draco isn't really OOC, neither is hermione really....
can't wait for the next update!! please update soon!! amazing work!
person luvhp
schedule October 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooh Narcissa is one sneaky Slytherin! That was awesome, and YES please do a sequel.
Okay, I didn't want to step on your toes, but wanted to help you post the last chapter.
I hope you're okay with it. I certainly didn't change anything, just copied and pasted here.
It's all YOUR work, and Brilliant work it is!!!
Love it!
person Camryn
schedule October 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg how sneaky!!!
lust potion, huh?! so, does that mean the affection wasn't real?? would be a pity....
love it, update again soon!!! =)
schedule October 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love the ending to this one, I think you ended it different to the one on coloured grey, because I had the feeling that Draco and Hermione never-ever liked each other and that they only had those feelings due to the love potion, or maybe I miss-read something it was about 1am!!!, will their be a sequal? if not more of this kind of story it was excellent!!!!!
schedule October 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was wrong the ending is just the same, told you I miss-read something!!!lol, Anyway can I just add a thanks to luvhp for helping to upload your fantastic fic on this site xxxxx
schedule October 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and I loved that last chapter - awesome sex in the library and Narcissa is very sneaky!

Please, please do a sequel. I so need to know what happens next!
person luvhp
schedule October 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yeah *does the happy dance* You're back, you're back, you're back!!!!!!
You have NO idea how happy I was to see you updated this absolutely lovey fic!
Can I tell you now that it was your story that prompted me to read and then write Dramione fics! *big grin*
Your Draco is so naughty and sexual. I can't see how she can possibly resist him any longer!
Can't wait for your update!!
person mhaj78
schedule October 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NO NO NO...YOU HAVE TO GET THE REST OF THE CHAPTER UP!!! Oh, gosh...I adore this story. How have I never read this before now?!
schedule September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YES!!!! at last I've found you, I can't believe I never reviewed before though, I really thought I had, thank you so much for letting me know it was your fic, oh and while I'm here, update soon!!!!! pretty please ;0)