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for All the way II: And Even Further

by MissSnape

person Megan Consoer
schedule July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Anon
schedule July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
o.o that does be interesting! more soon to come i hope!
person Jess
schedule July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your story, please update soon!!!!!
person Queen Celestia
schedule July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMC Lucius' mother is finally revealed!!!! This is getting exciting!! :3
person Queen Celestia
schedule July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aww such a cute chapter. u.u <3 Love ^_^
person Queen Celestia
schedule July 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
EEEE you added another chapter!

Ok I'll go read it now. >.>;
person Queen Celestia
schedule July 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Le gasp! Hermione drinking potions! That makes sense though. Rather scandelous though. :o
person Anon
schedule July 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
:) yay for another wondermous chapter! still looking forward to more, as always
person arg.
schedule July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
arg. i am now thoroughly confused. i absolutely adored your other story (All the Way) and this one is amazing too!

oh yeah, earlier on, when i was reading i noticed several grammar mistakes and what not...so yeah, it seems like its gotten better, but if you want someone to proof stuff before you post i wouldn't mind (don't worry, my proofing skills are better than my informal writing ones) lemme know!
person Queen Celestia
schedule July 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! Random sex scene. Not that I'm complaining since it's actually rather cute. =)