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July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story, very well written but whyyyy? *sniffs*
It's so sad how this all ends.
Anyway keep writing!
MD
It's so sad how this all ends.
Anyway keep writing!
MD
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June 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG...O_O wow....its a good story, and sad, in a way. OOC for both snape and maybe harry....but still really good.
Kozi
Kozi
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June 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That is dark. But it makes a lot of sense to write them tha way. Enjoyed!
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June 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good chapter
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June 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was a really beautiful little darkfic! It was written so beautifully that it almost seemed a little surreal to have such a beautifully written story be so sinister.
That is the power of your talent!
I love darkfics, and this was written so hopelessy, so bleak. There is no out for the two of them. They are both trapped in a vortex of pain, need, lust, violence, and back to pain again.
Thank you for posting this. It was really beautifully done!
That is the power of your talent!
I love darkfics, and this was written so hopelessy, so bleak. There is no out for the two of them. They are both trapped in a vortex of pain, need, lust, violence, and back to pain again.
Thank you for posting this. It was really beautifully done!
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June 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YUK - This is awful! Not my cup of tea, but good luck with the story anyway.
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June 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good story, bye
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June 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn! That just touched me in all the right places! Really looking forward to part 2. Please update soon, this was really good.
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June 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
...oh yeah, and I wanted to add that you might want to unclick your auto format in word, or code your story in notebook, as the embedded code that word puts into it\'s program to make sure the comma\'s are nice and swirly are screwing up and creating rogue fonts in your story.
It took me forever to figure that out, by the way. I hope you don\'t mind me sharing the knowledge.
It took me forever to figure that out, by the way. I hope you don\'t mind me sharing the knowledge.
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June 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story kicks ass on so many levels. Usually I read stories where Snape and Harru have this little lovey dovey teacher student relationship and the fact is that, YES! you\'d have to be perverted to go after your student. I love how evil you made Snape. Evil Snape kicks ass all over the place! Keep up the fucking amazing work!