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for Jealousy

by Samaelthekind

person misslala
schedule June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow, poor Draco. ;( Makes me sad, but it does seem like a logical path. Pity he doesn't realize how much Harry hates his fame.
person graballz
schedule February 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Raw. Raw, powerful emotion, and HOLY SHIT you did it to me again! I sobbed my heart out with this one! (For whatever twisted and glorious reason, I just LOVE the way you spin Harry and Draco into so much more than I've ever seen before!)
person Seraphwalker
schedule September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD!! That was so good! It sound ed just like the Draco we all know and love. Most people have a 'tilted' sense of the way things happen in their life. They seem to exaggerate what others do to them. But, Draco's narration seems to me to be very accurrate of how the word sees Harry. Thanks for the great story, and look forward to whatever you decide to write next.


Seraphwalker
person Pixagi
schedule September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Those last couple of sentances... ooo... Ran a chill down my spine, they did. It was so simple, pure of twisting complications. A bit predictable to the end, but I liked it none-the-less.
person Incessant_Darkness
schedule September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful. That's all I can really say. Death fics and suicides are usually done in a very bad way but this fic is not like that at all. I love the way things just seemed right despite how wrong what Draco was doing was. And I also liked the conclusion, how the story came full circle without effort it seemed. That was wonderful.

- Incessant_Darkness
schedule June 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow and I think that\'s all I need to say on that. Very good fic.
person Anna
schedule June 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well this was unexpected.
But don\'t worry, it\'s good.
person kumori
schedule June 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was so sad it makes me want to cry. but it was writen very well.