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for Harry Potter and the Footbal Team

by NeverAiling

person Lioncourt
schedule June 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sort of liked it. It felt like you had thought this through before you wrote it. Clever.
person Hyde
schedule June 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Mmmm. Innocent Harry. I almost feel sorry for him.. ;). hehehe. I like it! Are you going to continue with it, or just leave it as a oneshot? Either one for me would work. It was a delicious read. I don\'t know if I would want it to be continued now that I think about it.. It\'s just kind of perfect the way it is... but i wouldn\'t say no to more! lol definetly not. It reminds me of all those colleges getting into trouble lately for hazeing. haha. Good luck on future writtings.
Cheers,
Hyde