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July 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
These short chapters from Neville's view are so addicting, and I wish there were more.
It's a very good story despite a few typos and the misspelling of Blaise's last name: Zabini. Still lovely though.
It's a very good story despite a few typos and the misspelling of Blaise's last name: Zabini. Still lovely though.
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July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your pairing of blaize and neville is one I have seen only once before. I do kinda like it as well. The contrast of neville's days of quiet desperation and his memories of blaize and their relationship makes this a story that I would like to see more of. You have given neville a life of distict possibilities of what his future role in life may be. I do love the escalating attention from Blaize and his disbelief of having been ignored. Please more.