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June 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was a really cute story. And the first reviewer was dead wrong.
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January 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey, thanks for reading my little Snapey oneshot, I'm here to return the favour. :) Wow, you sure have written a lot of stories. I never think to do crossovers, I'll have to check out a few more when I get some free time. (whatever that is - LOL)
I loved this, so passionate and bittersweet at the same time. I'm glad Hermione got her message across (what a beautiful song) and I also hope she's learned by now how dumb the male species can be when it comes to feelings - yes we do have to spell it out for them even though we shouldn't have to. LOL You'd think Snapey would have been old enough to know better. Well done!!
I loved this, so passionate and bittersweet at the same time. I'm glad Hermione got her message across (what a beautiful song) and I also hope she's learned by now how dumb the male species can be when it comes to feelings - yes we do have to spell it out for them even though we shouldn't have to. LOL You'd think Snapey would have been old enough to know better. Well done!!
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August 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow
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August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhh i love it but then again I love all your stories. I hope you continue to write. this one was sweet.Keep up the good work, you're very talented. and I just so love your take on sevvy and hermy. much Kudos to you.
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July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Maybe Anon just doesn't like country music? Can't say that I blame them.
The lyrics are an interesting choice for a Hr/Snape songfic. What I have an issue with is the way the "flashbacks" are dealt with. It seems a bit cheesy to throw *FLASHBACK!* in the middle of your story, when clearly the actions in italics indicate a flashback. Other contextual clues could make this story more subtle if you chose to delete those *FLASHBACK!* markers, and could make it more enjoyable.
Anyway, people who leave un-constructive criticism are no use to you and should be ignored. Hopefully I've left you something you can use. :)
Good luck with this fic!
~Enthusiasto
The lyrics are an interesting choice for a Hr/Snape songfic. What I have an issue with is the way the "flashbacks" are dealt with. It seems a bit cheesy to throw *FLASHBACK!* in the middle of your story, when clearly the actions in italics indicate a flashback. Other contextual clues could make this story more subtle if you chose to delete those *FLASHBACK!* markers, and could make it more enjoyable.
Anyway, people who leave un-constructive criticism are no use to you and should be ignored. Hopefully I've left you something you can use. :)
Good luck with this fic!
~Enthusiasto
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July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW...*BOWS DOWN* to you, that was Beautiful. I love this type of story, I'm a romantic. And you made my heart swell up like a ballon I'm so happy. That put me in a really good mood! More stories need to be written like this.
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