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June 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice story
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June 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice story
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June 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is really good, plz add another chapter!
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June 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
dun dun DUUN!
Wonder what Harry\'s reaction will be?
Is Hermione going to be blind? was that dream about something that had really happened?
I\'m hooked on this. KEEP IT UP! Hope to read more soon
Wonder what Harry\'s reaction will be?
Is Hermione going to be blind? was that dream about something that had really happened?
I\'m hooked on this. KEEP IT UP! Hope to read more soon
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June 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Never apologize for the length of your works! It is quality of the tale, not the quantity of the words which craft it, that truely matter.
Ah, and what a tale you are crafting! How devious your mind to immerse us so completely in Hermione\'s torture, and to give us that rare glimpse of the Potion Master, balancing Death Eater with the teacher who must find a way to protect her.
I\'m addicted. Is there a potion for that? :D
Ah, and what a tale you are crafting! How devious your mind to immerse us so completely in Hermione\'s torture, and to give us that rare glimpse of the Potion Master, balancing Death Eater with the teacher who must find a way to protect her.
I\'m addicted. Is there a potion for that? :D
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June 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Quite intriguing-the time sequencing in telling this story. What actually happened and what was a dream? 2nd chapter\'s name and Hermione\'s actions in the dream - forgiveness or? Well written. We all are awaiting the next installment.
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June 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
another fun-tastic chapter. I am extremely pleased that you have put so much thought into character development and into the discourse between different characters. good luck not getting distracted away from this piece i would like to see its conclusion even if it is only a short fic that is made up for in the chapter length. happy writing
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June 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i\'m not kidding when i say this is THE BEST FANFIC i\'ve read!
i know that this is AFF and has adult-themed fics, but that doesn\'t mean that characters should always be OOC and there be no plots.
*applauds* this is an incredibly well thought out fic with a gripping storyline... not to mention incredibly well-written.
perhaps AFF should consider only accepting fics that are high quality...
...but then again, we all should be allowed to express yourselves, right?
please do continue this!
and congratulations on being nominated!
i know that this is AFF and has adult-themed fics, but that doesn\'t mean that characters should always be OOC and there be no plots.
*applauds* this is an incredibly well thought out fic with a gripping storyline... not to mention incredibly well-written.
perhaps AFF should consider only accepting fics that are high quality...
...but then again, we all should be allowed to express yourselves, right?
please do continue this!
and congratulations on being nominated!
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June 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Keep going...interesting!
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June 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It seemed that there was a plan even in the order in which he raped her...is that true...for instance biting her ear?