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for Porcelain Doll

by emymsm

person Darque Hart
schedule December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I do so hope you will continue with this. Sooner than later, too.
person annallel
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW.... I started reading the first chapter at 2am and I was hooked after that!!
Wonderfully written in such a way that it instantly captivates the readers.

It was a real shock at the end of chapter 3 to find out that Draco is masquerading as Hermione!

Please update ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Sampdoria
schedule August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story, you write really well and I can't wait for the rest of it. I am also glad for your statement of not making this an novellenght story, I find that some stories are too long, some of the intencity of a story get lost when making them to long. I love how you make Harry a more mature, grown up, person, it makes it so much belivable for him to have the strength to put an end to Voldemorts terror. It is my firm belive that even JKR will have to have Severus help Harry to win at the end. Please give us more of the story soon, I promise I will read your next chapters as soon as you finish them!
person Megan Consoer
schedule July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Shen
schedule July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
To the author of this fic,I sincerly thank you.I have not read such a more captivating and inspiring fic.The only fault that i have found with the fic is that it is incompleted,I humbly beseech you to if not finish it but to at least add another chapter.
person Emylee
schedule July 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, absolutely amazing so far. You have not only a good plot, but also a great writing style. I am completely hooked. I also completely understand about it being a one shot, then expanding. I myself have a story out badly in need of an update, but I have a certain disability that threatens to destroy any commitment to any long term projects I have! Having said that, I am going to be a filthy hipocrite and beg of you to update soon! Please, you are feeding my obsession! Great story! Im very interested in how it all plays out!
person Ertia
schedule July 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So, a healthy addiction, the Potions Master says? Well, if he says so, then I suppose I shall trust his wicked Slytherin judgement. Then again, to do so may mean I've as much sense as a scrambled Grindelow! (LOVED that line, by the way! Timing on it was perfect!)

Alas, this chapter took too long! I went into withdrawals and had to sooth myself by reading Legolas porn over in LOTR. *sigh* Reveal Hermione's state of being when you're ready and not before. Suppose if she IS blind she could get one of those magic eyes like Moody has?
person Abby_Luver
schedule July 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WHOA... AMAZING STORY!!!
person tabitoo
schedule July 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting story. I'm glad to see that Snape actually feels bad for what he has done. Hope nothing terrible has befallen Draco while Snape's been away. Hope you are able to post more soon.
person newfig
schedule July 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love it