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for The Blade

by lightangel

schedule November 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think this sounds like a B/D/H story....yummy
person Megan Consoer
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Megan Consoer
schedule June 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Drakie\'s baby 80
schedule June 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh Please update!!! I will love you forever... an ever and ever
person Darkwing 11111
schedule June 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Its really really good, but maybe you could get a beta reader? I love it so i want it to be the best it can be. Maybe you could also make the dialogue more real? It sounds fairly forced
person Missed Appointment_x
schedule June 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hm, I think you should enjoy writing and updating the story - they may be lurkers just not open enough to express how they feel about your fiction, and you\'re wanting to withhold the fic so you can get more reviews?
You should enjoy updating the story, not just to update because you have a certain amount of reviews.

person Rae
schedule June 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
continue plz great story!
person jadedmidnight
schedule June 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I\'m really digging this story. Hermione should just end up with the both of them. It\'s an idea. Can\'t wait for more.

~Diana
person Mark
schedule May 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Holy god this is so good! You are such a good writer.I love you so bad baby. Come home again I apologise for calling you a whore, i miss you angel
person Stratyllis
schedule May 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Threating to withhold chapters until you get X amount of reviews is horridly tacky.