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for The Malfoy Contract

by snoug

person darcy
schedule June 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
definitely break up. remember harry&draco?! jk. great story
person Sandra
schedule June 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, and thanks for e-mailing me when you updated.
schedule June 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good loophole can't wait to see harry's reaction.
person rai
schedule June 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
GOOD GOD. I LOVE YOUR FANFIC!! XD awesome, awesome, awesome, awesome! :D I love the way you write everything, tio HArry's iner arguments and to his first time, to his boyfiriend, to MAlfoy! ;D you're a VERY talented writer! :D I hope you plan on continuing this, because it's WONDERFUL! :D I'd love to read another chapter of this, but since I know how irritating it is I'm not going to nag you about another chapter, but don't fool yourself, that doesn't mean I don't want to read more ^^;

anyways, I love the way you wrote everything in different POV's, and I think you pulled them all off down to the last though. ;D AWESOME!

I wish you good luck with your writing and urge you to keep up your wonderful work! and if it's not TOO mcuh, could you PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE send me just a teeny-tiny email when you've updated? cause I'd love to read more of this. PRetty please? *puppy dog eyes*

*HUGGLES*
/Rai
person L4ETJE
schedule June 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
KEEP GOING AND POST SOON
BYE BYE
person LoveGD
schedule June 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Can\'t wait to see what you do next, so please update soon!
person kumori
schedule June 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i really like this story. it\'s funny. but poor harry, draco seems just a little bit posessive. (which is good.) keep up the good works.

kumori
person Storm
schedule June 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it. I\'ve been waiting for this one to be updated. The only thing I have to say is there was a bit of mistypes, like words that didn\'t fit or letters missed or wrong. Nothing major, just something a quick readover after your done typing would fix. but I see no problems with it. Oh and I vote for Adriano and Harry having a friendly break-up and Harry owling him for advice. Since he\'s only visiting his Grandfather, it seemed like it was just going to be a summer fling anyway. Good job and I can\'t wait for the next update.
schedule June 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think that you should maybe have him go to Hogwarts. It would be fun and I like anything that makes Ron uncomfortable.
I really like the story and hope to see more chapters soon.
person Jacki
schedule June 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Omygod! Great fic! I can\'t wait to read more. You need to update this as soon as possible. For some reason I just couldn\'t stop laughing, I thought the little interlude with everyone\'s thoughts was so funny. O, and I love jealous Draco. That line where Adriano said Draco looked liked he was going to skin him alive was great. Keep writing. I love it!