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for The Malfoy Contract

by snoug

person kumori
schedule July 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yey. i'm so happy you updated. i can't wait to see what Harry's reaction is going to be like. keep up the good work.

kumori
person Anon
schedule July 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
me like, write more.
person evalhanne
schedule July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is an interesting story. I can't wait to see what Draco does to get Harry!
person jbuggenz1
schedule July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think your fic shows a lot of promise. I hope that you will continue it. If you would please email me when you update.
person sexy seren
schedule June 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
update it soon....
person Rabid Creature
schedule June 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you need to work on your writing style a little bit. but since (i think you said this) this is your first fic, i'm going to be nice because writing only gets better with experience so don't stop. this is a really interesting idea but if you wrote with more detail it would be even better. but i have to say the interlude was SO FUNNY. LMAO! it was the best part ever! i liked the way it went in a chain and it was just great.
person Jace
schedule June 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey look. A review. *winces* Oh, wow, Jace is far too random. *chuckles* Anyway. Jace likes the story muchly and he hopes you continue soon.
person Rai
schedule June 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
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awesome! :D I really liked the part about the contract, but how did the grandpa get the potters to sign the contract? *curious* also, I think you wrote pansy well, I almost felt sorry for her (ALMOST ^^) but Draco was, as always, nice. ^^ I wonder how they're going to break this to Harry? And how's his reaction going to be? ^^ *sniggers*

Loved your chapter, keep up your awesome work!! ;D And could you please email me when you upload your next chapter too? ^________^ cause otherwise I'd probably forget to check for updates... >.<... and then I'd miss you wonderful writing!! >.<;;

*HUGGLES*
person sexy seren
schedule June 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
update it soon as possible... mwah....
person LoveGD
schedule June 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely brill chapter! Can't wait for more, so please update soon!