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for Life On Mute

by chy

person Squall-sama
schedule September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, please, please, please don't stop writing this fic! It's adorable and tragic and I want to see how you help Harry out of his problems. I love problem solving in fics!
person Lioncourt
schedule September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You are a very talented writer. There is an ingenious simplicity to your writing that I really like.

person Lioncourt
schedule September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like

1. Harry character. I feel that it is written with great insight and that contributes to the story.
2. Snape's character. He is like he was in the books, but by seeing him trough Harry's eyes puts him in a new light. It is stimulating and very interesting. ^^
3. The plot. Harry is mute and starting his first year at Hogwarts. That idea is creative and new to me. Something I have never imagined I would get to read. When reading fics I often feel that I have 'read this story before'. Not so this time.
4. The rewriting of the Potterian History. It's like reading the Philosopher's Stone all over again, but this time the situation is different. I think you have created a good balance between following Rowling's story and changing it.
5. Harry does not despise Snape! He never has, and never will. Haven't we all itched to banish the general hatred towards Snape at least fifty times while reading the books? Well I have! And now my wish has come true! ^^
6. The possibility that you will update soon..?
person Night Shade
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay, you updated! I'm really liking thiss, it iss sso original. Thiss chapter wass very good, it sseemed lesss russhed than the otherss. I can't wait until you update again. Happy Writingss.
person vyator
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is so cool, and such a good idea, I'm loving it and I can't wait to read more, keep up the great work!
person Sophia
schedule September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A really nice chapter and I love the way it's developing. Keep up the great work and I look forward for more.
person The w00t Girl
schedule September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another, good chapter, glad to see that Severus is going to have to spend time with Harry.
person Hambares
schedule September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Thanx for updating!! I can't wait for more!!! I know, I am greedy, but this is so good!
person Black Kitten
schedule September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh PLEASE don't stop. . . I can't wait for the next chappie.
person kyuuchan
schedule August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O.O I LOVE this story and I'm looking forward to the next chapter!b
I hope everything settles down for you, stress is no good! ^.^