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Thanks for your imput. I had thought about that and I knew it would be a HUGE plot hole but I couldn\'t really come up with anything concerning Snape that would add anything to my story. So, I decided to leave it as is instead of trying to explain another tangent. :P However, if something does happen to come to me, I might go back and edit it. I hadn\'t planned on the potions class or Snape being main players in my story. I hope that it wasn\'t too distracting, though I could understand how it could be. Thanks for reading ^_^

You have a nice little beginning here. All I suggest is that you do a little editing. You have some errors in typing which kind of deter the eye, but other than that, I like what you have. Continue reading. And if you need a beta, there are tons out there. I\'d even do it for you.