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for One Fine Line

by dolceamara

schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Your story is amazing! Exactly how I picture their relationship! Keep up the superb work! I can't wait to see what happens next!
schedule July 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
There is really a fine line between lust/love and hate, and well it is so rightly and hottly discripted here, please keep the chapters coming and please keep up the good work. Update soon.
person wudelfin
schedule December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey this is damn good!! FINISH IT!!!
person Melissa
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Amazing! This story has me itching to find out what happens next. Please update soon!
person zara
schedule September 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it...........very much :) and hope to read the next chapter soon....Really good. And hot, if i may add
person di
schedule September 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i like it alot way to go is hermonie going to become good or bad? can't wait for next chapater
person oooohhhh
schedule September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please update soon, this story is really well written and has a pretty good story line!
person Given2Fly
schedule July 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Must. Have. UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LoL



I love this story.....PLEASE update soon!
person STR
schedule July 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Absobalilutely brilliant!! update, por favor!!!
person adri
schedule June 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
pretty exciting i cant wait for an update.