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July 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oooo... this was grreat. dark and yet... it makes you wonder....
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October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is an extremely difficult pairing to write believably in a one-shot... but you not only managed it, you did it with fluid ease. I especially liked your ending. He doesn't care about her, only about getting his own way, and you showed that very clearly throughout.
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August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
People are constantly writing about Lucius and Hermione falling in love and they lived happily ever after (not that I don't enjoy those sometimes ;D). That or Hermione realizes, depsite her knowledge of what all Lucius has done and that he is a Death Eater, she falls in love with him anyway... and live happily ever after. This one, however, is different... HE is the one with the obsession... HE is the one that initiates it... HE is the one who is unable to resist... and HE is the one that loses control. I also like that you used the whole "guy pulling on your hair" idea... his causing her pain because he loved her and wanted her so badly.
Just when I thought that there was no chance that I would ever find a story like this one. Very well done, kudos to you. I had actually thought about writing one myself, but found I couldn't quite get the theme right. Thank you for writing it, it certainly made my day.
>: Heidi Hoe
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Just when I thought that there was no chance that I would ever find a story like this one. Very well done, kudos to you. I had actually thought about writing one myself, but found I couldn't quite get the theme right. Thank you for writing it, it certainly made my day.
>: Heidi Hoe
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July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's a shame you've marked this as a one shot.
I would like to read about the rape, and Hermione's reactions to it, and the knowledge that Lucius will not let her go afterwards.
Please add another chapter. This is so good. I much prefer these L/Hr fics, where Hermione fights every bit of the way, while Lucius takes her forcibly, rather than the "I'm so ooc, I'm in love with an evil Deatheater" fics.
Would begging on bended knees make you add another chapter?
Great job.
I would like to read about the rape, and Hermione's reactions to it, and the knowledge that Lucius will not let her go afterwards.
Please add another chapter. This is so good. I much prefer these L/Hr fics, where Hermione fights every bit of the way, while Lucius takes her forcibly, rather than the "I'm so ooc, I'm in love with an evil Deatheater" fics.
Would begging on bended knees make you add another chapter?
Great job.
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July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you muuuust make another chapter, pwetty pweeez??
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July 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love all of your stuff, and this one was amazing as well. Are you going to continue it?
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June 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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June 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The best LM/HG story I have read yet. Bloody amazing!