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for A Yearning

by Brf526

person Queen Celestia
schedule June 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is getting more and more enthralling.
person Queen Celestia
schedule June 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh noes..
person Julie
schedule June 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*Whew*

Hot in here isn\'t it?

My my don\'t leave us *ahem* hanging like this...
schedule June 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story so far! I can\'t wait to read more. Update again and soon.

Tiffany
person CB13
schedule May 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I\'m delighted to let you know that you are the first fan-fic author of my experience to correctly spell \"fazed\" - most use \"fased\" or, worse, \"phazed\" instead. Your writing is good, which means the reader is not distracted from the story, and it\'s a fun story! Looking forward to seeing what happens next.
person Nev/Wormtail
schedule May 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good Story! I wonder what Hermione is up too! Why is she so relaxed? That\'s really odd!
person SeductionsClaim too lazy to log in
schedule May 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*pokes you with a spork* BAD EVIL CLIFFY!!!

I want a rapid update, and I want sex :P MWHAHAHAH demanding aren\'t i?

I LOVE IT!

Wonderfully wicked.....wish I could have dreams like that
person Bree
schedule May 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Snape is sooooooo frustrating!!! And so hot at the same time... Hehe... I like this story so far. I hope you plan to continue it. It sounds like Hermione and Snape or in for lots of \"fun\" time =)