rate_review Reviews

Wow. Just. Wow. I wish I could hate it, but it was very good. You did a great job showing emotions. Once Severus said that Lucius had been raping him, my feelings about the story changed- at first, I didn't like it b/c it seemed like Severus was just being a selfish ass. However, once we saw Sev's side of the story, everything came together. Very nicely done, I would def. recommend it.

That was horrible and sad and nearly made me sick. It was also very well written. Brava for having the guts to write what I'm sure you knew would get you constant flames. Keep up the good work dearie, and use the flames to keep you warm on cold nights, as that's about all they're good for. The world has too many happy endings anyway. *wink*

To be honest, I was a little horrified when I read the summary of this fic, but it also compelled me to read it. I must say, I'm glad I did. It was well written and captivating, a fic that really sucks you into the plot. I commend you, kudos!

That was amazing.

It almost got me crying.

Not because of the abortion but because Lucius so badly wanted to raise the child in a way differently than he raised Draco.

Good read

I must say, I have read many, many sexually infused HP fanfics. I do prefer the dark ones...I guess it's that secret "place" we all have in our hearts...mind...soul...that makes us want to experience these things; from a safe distance of course. The stories I've read have taken me through many aspects of the HP world; so many girls and boys losing their virginity, willing and unwilling; over and over in countless and sometimes bizarre and barbaric ways...so be it. I even came across a sad story of lost love only to find it ended with a corpse...yikes! But very good reading...
Now, on to your review...Bravo!
I sit here in want of a thesaurus, to be able to find the words to describe the many...wonderful..(?)..too cheesy...For the many horrific (meant in a good way) and ghastly moments in your story. Again I say Bravo! You got my attention! I'm a woman and I cringed when Snape stepped on Malfoy's...pride. I have only one question, how does a man get pregnant? I've often wondered if it's because 'he' is a wizard, as 'muggle-men' in our world cannot get pregnant...While yours is not the first male pregnancy I've come across, yours was the most...colorful.
I'm off to find some more interesting reading...Keep up the good...(?)...yeah, it was "good" work!

I enjoyed this fiction. Not the regular approach to any of the subjects (pregnancy, SS/LM having an affair, Albus' always getting his way). It was well thought out and presented in a believable fashion. Good job.