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September 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow , wow wowowowowowowowow
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September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay . . . finally got Chapter 12 read . . . and it was okay . . . not as strong as the previous 11, but I know you had trouble with this one, and I feel your pain - cause I've been there before myself in my own writing. Anyway - keep up the good work, and more soon please! 8~D
~ptc~
~ptc~
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September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE!!UPDATE!!UPDATE SOOON!!......i do wish she'll stop regretting and just..fall for him already!!..haha..
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September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"Alive again...after he died so many times.
How cruel could life be?
He never thought a day would come that his tears would mix with the blood he hated."
OOOOOOH, those were some lovely lines! I'm so glad to read this new chapter and can't wait for more! I bet the moment of "truth" will be angsty and delightful!!! I can hardly wait!
How cruel could life be?
He never thought a day would come that his tears would mix with the blood he hated."
OOOOOOH, those were some lovely lines! I'm so glad to read this new chapter and can't wait for more! I bet the moment of "truth" will be angsty and delightful!!! I can hardly wait!
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September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sexy!
I like, I like very much!
Please continue!
I like, I like very much!
Please continue!
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September 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi, congratulations, an other very good chap. Love how you write and the story.looking forward to see if she finely gives completly in. update soon!
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September 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
God I LOVE this fic. Thank you so much for updating. I wonder what's coming next.
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August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WTF? How did I miss this update? I've been following this story religiously (as you know). I did notice that the title isn't in all caps anymore, but that's no excuse. Shame on me. I am SOOOOOOOOOOOO glad to hear that you have not abandoned it; I was beginning to lose hope. *cries* Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
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August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
My God I love this story, I just finished the story but Iwanted to comment about the end of chapter 7 "He would rather kill her than ever let her leave" that was such a fantastic line, I LOVE that line kind of deranged obessessed with a touch of fluff to it.
I hear your having problems with the next chapter, since I have no idea where you want to go with this I can't help too much but I have one suggestion.
From Draco's POV have Harry and Ron show up (FOr what reason I haven't got a clue) and maybe have Hermione see them but Draco sees her before Ron and Harry can see her or before Hermione can say anything (She's in shock) Draco stopps her from making her presence known and locks her in her room.
Sorry if this is a stupid suggestion, but I thought it might be intresting. It would help if you want to amp up the angst.
Please update as soon as you can.
I hear your having problems with the next chapter, since I have no idea where you want to go with this I can't help too much but I have one suggestion.
From Draco's POV have Harry and Ron show up (FOr what reason I haven't got a clue) and maybe have Hermione see them but Draco sees her before Ron and Harry can see her or before Hermione can say anything (She's in shock) Draco stopps her from making her presence known and locks her in her room.
Sorry if this is a stupid suggestion, but I thought it might be intresting. It would help if you want to amp up the angst.
Please update as soon as you can.
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August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your doing great!! Don't get discouraged.