rate_review Reviews

I SIMPLY LOVE IT.... L.O.V.E IT!! well written, perfect story plot...i found it so..deep... soul brreaking...the angst the pain the love, so real.... the end was perfect... just read all the chapters one after the other ..just LOVE LOVE LOVE IT.. good work girl ;)

no matter how many times i read this fic, it always manages to put a smile on my face. keep up the good work maja... we're routing for u! [(:]

I love the way you write. *sigh* I hope this isn't the end

one of the best which i had read. really. nd ya know whats more better- i had read a lot of them. a very looooot of them. :) need see more of yours.

Chapter 13 is absoloutley amazing! I am glad to see you didnt take Dr Deuch's crtisizim and stop writing, I love this story so much and cannot wait to see how it ends, You truely have an amazing way of making words run together to explode with emotion! You are so my hero!

Magzie

Yay! I love your story so much and I love the twist in this chapter! Please keep it up, it's really good work... I so hope their future won't BE bitter after all... they so deserve to be happy, to give up all their doubts and fears and everything and finally admit to each other what they've kept hidden for so long... Can't wait for more!
Just to let you know I never stopped reading your story, though I didn't review the last few chapters ;)

Cheers,
Luthi

Hey, it's been a while. Great update and FINALLY Hermione realizes her true feelings.

it will really turn people off from reading your story when you have spelling mistakes in the summary. Get a beta to help you fix them, also try reading your story to yourself aloud. It will help you improve your writing.

I've been waiting so long for a new chappie and I check and theres ARROGANCE! Jeez! Not you.. DC deuch bag or whoever that was.. Dont take his comment to heart hun, Your story is AMAZING everything about it.. the plot, how he is trying to break her and I get it.. I get so much of it.. I also get your A/N.. war is black and white and I've been there, I have friends in Kuwait and Iraq right now and when i talk to them they show no emotion because they are stripped of it.

Anyways I re read tainted white and your gramical errors are not bad at all.. If you are really interested in the story it doesnt take much at all to figure out what you are trying to say and its not like the words are 100% incorrect and you cant make out what it is suposed to be.. so fuck DC Deuch Bag and keep writing!

I loooove this story and you are sooo my hero!
Chappie Chappie Chappie Chappie.. write a new one sooon paleeeeeaaaaasssseeeee!

Me again.. I cam to the conclusion that DC Deuch Bag was a great substitute for what ever the name really was.. I only read your AN then i found his review.. Damm him and his im so fucking proper bullshit... Lets see.. this person is acting like my god damm english teacher.. maybe if they are some sort of professor they would have been professional enough to realise this is an, Adult Fan FICTION website where ADULTS write what they would like.. we are not here to be processed and evaluated on our grammer and skills.. so he can fuck his hat.. Anyways.. just keeping up with my normal.. I love love love this story and cannot wait.. for a new chappie.. obviously as shown above...

Your my hero..
And if anyone says your a bad writer they can fuck themselves because i think you are
BRILLIANT!
AMAZING
WONDERFUL
AWESOME
TALENTED
SUPER RAD!
ok im done :P