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March 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
My God's that is one hell of an excellent story!! I can't believe it was your first! The way the fight for dominence wasn't over even in the last chapter!! just ... WOW!!
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December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes you should update soon!!
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October 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah...I don't believe I've read such drool worthy smut in a while... The chemistry between them was something I like in fics, I mean most people make them fall almost morbidly in love(not that I complain, I absolutely adore fluff)with the first kiss and there's no dominance battle at all... I believe they should fight all the way through THEN confess their passionate love for each other. It did make me a bit sad when Harry and Draco are still all stubborn and not tied up in each other in anything but lust, but oh well I liked it all the same. You might need to work on the flow of the story a wee bit though, it didn't sit that well with me. That's all from me...it was a really good first story, heh!! *winkz*
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August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love this story, why did you stop writing it?!?!!? its my favortie of the ones i have read, please post more chapters soon!!!
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August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story, excellent characterisation and pacing for a pwp story. It's certainly one of the best pwp draco/harry stories I've read on this site. The grammar and spelling were also excellent, allowing for maximum imersion in the story rather than being pulled up by poor writing every few lines.
You should definitely write more stories of this nature, power struggle/angry draco/harry is hot >_>
You should definitely write more stories of this nature, power struggle/angry draco/harry is hot >_>
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August 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Jesus...*a billion hugs and kisses*
Thanks for writing this!
Thanks for writing this!
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July 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O God i love your writing , the battle of domination between Draco and Harry is so exciting , the hottest fanfic i
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June 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. God. That was so hawt! Very enjoyable... ~_^ And the fact that you had hardly any spelling or grammer mistakes made me very pleased. Most others that I have read I had to stop in the middle because I had the strongest urge to go through and correct all the mistakes. Once again nice job.
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June 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i fail to find words on how good a writer you are. geez, you've had me stuck on the screen since i started reading this thing.
you should DEFINITELY continue. <3!
XD
you should DEFINITELY continue. <3!
XD
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June 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW! that was hot. I mean fantastic!