rate_review Reviews

The story is very good. But I regret one thing ; it sound as it could be a set of stories as the one now. With the implication of Fleur and Gabrielle, you could explain how they are implicated in this story, you could also exlpain how the threee became this threesome. In a say, you made a context to put a story, and just wrote a one shot on. Few next chapters are possible, enjoy the ideas you can have.

I love the story but please do not tell me its only going to be one chapter. I sincerely hope to see more on this interesting take on Potter after Hogwarts.

verry cool idea must say i love it and im egerly awaiting more

The story is funny as hell. are you going to put up another chapter for this story.

Hey I thought it was erotic and funny as hell. But I'm confused is this a one shot or will there be more? anyway it was damn good like always.

Very nice! I kinda wish you would write a sequel where Harry and the four girls enjoy a private celebration weekend! ;) But what is PP3?

I love any fic that goes out of the norm. I hope you update soon, I rather like the plot. The sex scenes need more work, I would like for them to be longer, and more descriptive, but that might not be what you might like. Are any of his old friends going to be mentioned? Such as where the weasleys, or Hermione are? how about the death eaters? are they all dead? if so, how come some of the pureblood extremist still exist? If Daphnee is leader of that coalition how come she posed for playwizard? was she just nominated, or was it saome contest completely made up by their editor? Update soon.