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December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my. xD You definitely posted 'us' three times. *giggles* Cute story. ^^
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December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey i know you probably know this but uve posted chaper 14 three times. all in all though, bloody good. Keep writing.
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November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh I need chapter 14!!!
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November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
There. I review. ::pout::
Anyway, likelove the story, but /reeeeeeeeeally/ wants to beta it.
So mayn mistakes! TT________TT
But still a good story. <3
Anyway, likelove the story, but /reeeeeeeeeally/ wants to beta it.
So mayn mistakes! TT________TT
But still a good story. <3
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November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What??? Add soon
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October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Mouth gapping (starting to look like a fish here) can't believe that Draco did that just like that it's just... it's just... GREAT.^_^
I said it once I say it again this story is coming out to be a really good story. Can't wait till next update; hope it's Soon.
I said it once I say it again this story is coming out to be a really good story. Can't wait till next update; hope it's Soon.
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October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh, I love it. Especially the scene with Lucius and Severus. Hope you write more soon.
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October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this! You see need to continue forwards with it.
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October 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don't think you should be worrying about, Please review! I am getting low on self-esteem! I need to know if ya'll like this! thingny because your story is great I would only wish that the chapters were a little bit more longer. Other then that Loved your story.
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October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Things you could improve:
1. Stop saying "Shite". Shit is far less annoying.
2. Stop making Ron out to be a ranting fool.
3. Run a spell check, or have a beta tester, please.
I really like the storyline and Dracos personality.
1. Stop saying "Shite". Shit is far less annoying.
2. Stop making Ron out to be a ranting fool.
3. Run a spell check, or have a beta tester, please.
I really like the storyline and Dracos personality.