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for Torn - Repost

by Ravenkiss2000

person Suiri
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have to admit, your Hagrid was *cough* interesting. LOL. Never thought of him in that way before your fic. Poor Snape, I'm glad he's getting better. I can't wait to read the next part. Awesome story.
person Suiri
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sorry, forgot to ask this question in my last review, but is Draco Malfoy going to make an apperance? Just curious. LOL. Ps. Can I place my vote for Lupin? Go Remus!!!
person Anon
schedule December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The paring with Hagrid is freaky, but you know that i'm sure!

Anyway, hope to read some more soon...
person Anon
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
when i spotted your story i was confused by RH, i was like who the hell is RH?

when i started reading, i was no! ewww! yuk!!! gag!!!

but now that i'm done with the 20 chapters...i'm like ok not so bad...still freaky but in a nice funny sort of

way! hope he ends up with Lupin though! i have a soft spot for werewolves!....

one last thing is Harry really nutters...i kind of figured it was him but i guess i like the character so much

that i'm kind of hoping Sirius has come back from the dead and has possesed the poor sod.

well, i look forward to your next posting!
person chibifae
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i'm really loving this fic. i love how u write the characters. update soon and often.
person Lina
schedule December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE LET SEVERUS PICK HAGRID!!!! I love HAGRID, and giants need love!!!!!!!!!
person Aires
schedule November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is so sweet. :)
i do like hagrid..but....i really want sev to get it on with remus.god...hagrid is half giant how massive his cock must be.lmao
sev would be torn in 2.....
but...please write more soon.
person Aires
schedule November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh...i was abit suprised.just abit though.when reading through the story and harry's 'friend' suddenly appered.i had a guess that harry had lost his mind.was suprised it was sirius...dont know why though.who else would harry re-create in his mind?well maybe james.very sad that it was all harry. :(
will harry be making any more apperences from time to time?
person Lina
schedule October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY!! UPDATE SOME MORE!!! NOW!!!!!
person Ethan
schedule August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have a feeling that Harry's "friend" Is a multiple personality or something. Also, the parts when it goes to Harry's POV are a little too obvious and oversimplified. Othe than that, well done.