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for A Proper Valentines' Day

by RyuaAlba

person Fayumii
schedule November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
heh this story rocks. there aren't enough good hermione girl/girl pairings out there. keep em coming thhhhheeeey're Great!
person D.O.A.T.
schedule November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awesome chapter hope you update soon
person Seraph
schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
dude!! I gotta say that was mindblowing!! the whole length of all 5 chapters was I in the edge of the chair! really! you gotta keep writing this one cuz it's absolutely awesome!!!
person Fan of Yours
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You're very good at describing things and everything seems to flow. But the plot of each chapter seems to be the same exact thing just in a different area, so a change in plot would be good. Also, there's a little too much dialogue sometimes (maybe that's just me). And here are some things you could add - maybe they should decide to be open about their relationship, maybe add some guys... and some... wands... and... magic... and possibly her broomstick (XD, maybe not that one).

Please write more!
person annie
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you just made my day! i've been checking for updates almost dayly... x)
well, if you
person lang
schedule November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
me likes good as always
person King_Booze
schedule November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter! Though ya kept me waiting long enough (I don't know how many time i cheaked my email!) regardless thatnk you once again and later.
person khaleda
schedule November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was...nice. Great job, I love these two together. I eagerly await the next chapter...
person annie
schedule September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey there.
You just HAVE to update soon!
I really enjoy reading this... =)
You have a fan here! Keep up!
Oh, and here in Brazil valentines' day is on June, 12th. So, it worked for me! =P
Cheers!
schedule August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loving the story. Like to see where you take this.