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Am I the only one wanting a bath now? Ok, nevermind, it was great, as usual and now I'm trying to work out who came into the bathroom...was it Ron? Or Draco? Or a teacher even? Oh god, it wasn't Snape was it? Because that would be very very bad...Ok, enough rambling and random guessing. I can't wait to see if you update again. I hope you do.

Oh, this is wonderfull. It is so hard to find good femslash. And finally a fic were Hermione is with someone else than Ginny! I cant`t tell you how happy I am. Please update soon.

Sooooo...you gonna update any time soon? Because I like where this is going. I like how forward and primal Ryua is...and curious as to the origins of those scars. Maybe see some of this bondage Ryua has a thing for...hm?

PLEASE update soon.... =)

Pretty nice story you have there ;)
I have to especially comment your range of vocabulary, your grammar and the description of some scenes, which were excellent (very few mistakes).
But (everything has a but, doesn't it?), I was kinda... let's say, amused by the way the two girls got together. A little too out of the blue, wasn't it? I don't know if you you're dealing with a world that prejudice doesn't exist or anything similar situation, but Hermione, in the book, doesn't have any lesbian relationship or thoughts (though I think she should, because Ron is... uhh... disgusting)
And Ron and Harry, her best friends appeared in the story only once, which is weird. In the 6th year, they kept following her around, why wouldn't they do the same in the 7th?
I hope you do not take this as a flame. It is not. I'm also an author and for me, reviews like this are really useful. Hope you agree
Best Wishes, Renata

i like swords!

Best F/F HP fics I've seen so far. Your writing is absolutely marvelous. I hope you'll write another Yuri HP fics. Keep up the good work.

Good sex = Good story, as far as I'm concerned. One thing I notice though, is that only one partner get's to achieve orgasm when they have sex, and, perhaps it's just me, but my girlfriend would never hear the END of it if we were fucking and she came and rolled over and said goodnight. There would be hell to pay, I assure you.

Requests?! I want to see some bondage, maybe some more kink, like paddles and whatnot. (If you need a paddle idea, my lover and I have a fabulous one, that has studs that smack the words "slut" into the skin. The humiliation factor makes it sexier, and makes me such a ho.) Also, perhaps some clit on cilt grinding sexiness, and not just hands and mouth? Anyways, keep going! =D

Oh my god, this is so ... beautifully written! And so real. Tasteful smut is an oxymoron no longer. Thank you SO much for this gift ... it's definitely going on my favorites ... and as soon as I regain my ability to think, I'm requesting a scene from you! *pant* Good lord.

dude you gotta keep writing this one is very hot and sexy....just like me (no im not gay just informing the good people of this webcite) so yea u gotta keep writing plz